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Very good! I've had my one true goal squashed in it's prime right when I had a ray of hope. I've wanted to go to collage, make money, and get the hell away from my parents for as long as I remember. But my parents learned that 50% of collage students are, injured, killed, or raped. So I've been forbidden to go outside un watched, forced to quit track and art, oh, and did I mention that I was forbidden to even try to get into a collage? Hopefully Tech School isn't that way when I turn eighteen. If it is, I'll just double my daily exercises time and effort, and fight if anyone tried to do anything to me. I'm all ready pretty kick-ass when challenged though... Heh...heh...once I was challenged by a boy to fight, I provoked it by my back talk instinct, for he was saying that men were better than women. He was double my size, hight, and weight. He about about...sixteen I'm guessing. He was on the track team. I went up to him saying, "Shut the hell up, you toilet drinking f***er." He got so mad, it's impossible to sensor what he called me... Best of all when he tried to attack me, I dodged everyone of his attacks and won easily... I was in a really bad mood, so I had rage on my side. Most of all, I enjoyed it greatly! It also cooled my temper nicely... He quit after that too! Anyhow, to get back on track, since it's a little too easy for me to get side tracked, this is a very good poem, and I can relate completely. Great work, keep writing!
may the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders,
Who needs to work on her language. :)
This was a very interesting piece. I agree just a little bit with Jane. This person seems very rebellious. Good job, it seems as if you know him/her well enough to write such an interesting poem about them.
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