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01-07-2006
Mehrina Butt
The panic, the determination, the infinite depth, THIS IS THE BEST!!! I LOVE it! It's so strong and yet, so beautifully woven. Like water. Don't ask, I'm thinking of water. Maybe I'm dehydrating? O_O
Anyway, there is one prominent mistake. The 4th last line, I think murders should be murderers. All in all, GREAT JOB!!!
P.S. This poem has created a scene in my mind that would be great for Double!
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