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   11-17-2007 Chermayn Fong
Man, this is sad...but it's true, that's why it's more sad(der). I wish it isn't, but it is. So...it's..sad.
Unfortunately, there doesn't seem to be any solution for this kind of conflict, which is...like I said, Sad.
Thanks for the sad, but good...read.
Chermayn Fong
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01-31-2007 Daniel Hedgecorth
This was an excellent poem. Stay true to your heart
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    05-14-2006 Regina Pate
I wonder if they do it for country sake or if they do it for their own, do they really care what their fighting for, I think they are just running away from home, I think these soilders don't really think their are gonna die, they just so desperatly need a reason to say good bye. Willing to die, that's not that hard to do, but it's selfish, to not care about the ones you leave behind, it doesn't matter who, and I would hate to think that our country's backbone is supported by sinful pride, and selfish glory, no I will say they don't expect to die, when I tell my kids the story, Great write, good job, thanks,
Regina
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02-08-2006 Mike Macdonald
I see a lot of heart in this, but it needs a bit of a touch-up. A few lines (like the last one) could definitely be reworded.
Keep up the good work.
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