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A Working Hollow

by Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli (Age: 26)
copyright 01-12-2006


Age Rating: 13 +
A Working Hollow


I couldn't really think of a good title for this poem. Anybody have any good suggestions?

I walk the shadows of darkness
Stroll the alleys of light
Explore the valleys of wholeness
And let my dreams take flight

I cry a river of tears
Smile when I feel fine
Let go of all my fears
And let my emotions shine

I see a hallway of pain
I feel an armful of laughter
Dance in the midnight rain
Kill the sorrows I'm after

This is what I do
I am a working hollow
Offering consoling to you
So you can still see tomorrow






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        08-07-2010     Leigh Gilholm Fisher        

This poem was very unique! I really like the idea behind this poem. The situation of someone who is empty inside, someone who is forced to stand without help. Since such types of people seem to attract others who have problems and need someone to talk to, or a shoulder to cry on, it seems that these 'working hollows' are left to guide their freinds toward tomorrow while they struggle to get through today.

And I really got rambling for this one... XD Nevertheless, excellent work here!


~Leigh of the Commenting Community



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