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Amazing. Simply amazing. This is so meaningful and we all feel like this. Even though for some people, when we're torn open, we're forced to stay open and not get any time to regrow. I could go on forever about how this reminds me of other things, but since I'm in a good mood, I'll most likely get very side tracked and when I'm cheery I have horrible language... Anyhow, since I'm so wonderful at getting side track when I'm talking about not getting side tracked, you still did an amazing job with this, and like the others said, this work should be seen and recognized by more. Even though there's no need to use caps lock for the whole comment... Sorry, grammar freak showing. This is an amazing poem, and the way you put it was great. It reminds me of a poem I wrote... Great work, keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Beautifully said. A really really well-structured poem And I can hear your voice so loud and clear and with so much passion. Totally entertaining and moving from first to last.
This is an excellent poem. It is really a dark poem. I too know what it's like for others to force you to grow up to quickly and do things you are not ready for. Good Work. Keep it up.
IT IS UNBELIEVABLE TO ME TO SEE THAT SUCH WORK HAS BEEN IGNORED. EUNA, I COMMEND YOU FOR YOUR BRAVERY AND FOR TAKING A STAND THAT VERY FEW YOUNG MEN AND WOMEN TAKE. YOU WERE OBVIOUSLY LISTENING WHEN YOU WERE BEING TAUGHT. I AM VERY PROUD OF YOU. YOU HELD BACK AND DID NOT GIVE INTO THIS JERK THAT WANTED YOU FOR REASONS OTHER THAN TRUE LOVE AND UNDERSTANDING. BUT WHAT PLEASES ME MOST IS THAT YOU WERE RELENTLESS IN YOUR POSITION AND DID NOT WAVERED! GOOD FOR YOU! YOU KNOW YOUR TRUE WORTH. AS FAR AS YOUR POEM, IT IS WELL WRITTEN, INSPIRING AND THE IMAGERY IS TRULY AWESOME! IN THIS SENTENCE, "you become anger, and tear me more." YOU MEANT, "YOU BECOME ANGRY." BUT BECAUSE YOUR POEM IS A WORK OF ART, IN MY OPINION AND BECAUSE YOU TOOK A STAND AND STOOD UP FOR WHAT YOU BELIEVED, I WILL GIVE YOU FIVE STARS. I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU MORE. MAY GOD CONTINUE TO ENLIGHTEN YOU AND GUIDE YOU LIKE HE HAS!
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