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Flames Amongst Frost
by Tiffany Forster (Age: 21)
copyright 02-06-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
I would like to show you
My heart undone
Its lies and protections
Removed from their place
I would like to show you
My labyrinths, near
Where, if only in shadow
You would be lost
I wish I could tell you
The lies that I weave
The truths I am breaking
The ways I deceive
I wish I could tell you
The ways of my heart
Its waxing and waning
Its drifting apart
There are things I am wishing
For me as it seems
The lies I am telling
To take on new means
The patterns I fall to
To say what I say
To find a new rhythm
To find a new way
These are my thoughts
Where, in darkness I’m bound
The truths may lie scattered
Yet never are found
So rise to the challenge
Show all is not lost
Let me live in the fire
Flames amongst frost.


((Yeah, I realize that this starts off free verse like, and ends up rhyming, I don't know why, but I still like it... -sigh-))


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02-13-2006 James Shammas    

I love the last few lines and the bravado and feeling of self-affirmation and confidence I get from the ending.

Jim
02-11-2006 Nancy Pawley    

Tiffany, what can I say? Most times a writer doesn't have complete control of how a poem or story goes. The last three lines gives an added punch to the whole theme, offering no apologies for who and what the author is while giving the reader a phrase that sticks like glue in the reader's mind.
Nancy
02-09-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

~Hands her another award~
I'm going to move to another web site if you get any better. ~feels humiliated~ I too really like the change from freestyle to rhyme. I like experimentation, as you probably already know.
Perhaps you should write a piece about how your real personality hides behind your poetry.

~slinks away~

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