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Death Anew
by Jack Curson (Age: 32)
copyright 12-28-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
He walks steadily behind the door of men’s hearts,
Drawing near, his pain infects as this soul departs,
A vampiric bite takes hold, impossible to shake alone.
Trapped feelings captivate as he waits for your beseeching tone.
With eyes wide open passing events bring false solace,
Moments cuddle behind the safety of a cryptic scowl.
All the while befuddled henchmen of death,
Lurk in the shadows waiting for their perfect moment to strike.
The long road ahead brings the thoughts that I don’t belong here,
A giver of death has me…
Awakened?
This scavenger of life tells of his creation,
I am born from “life” given to “death” from the bite of his love.
Steadily hunger begs from my empty veins,
Crushing any hope of remorse for the deed that is to be done.
Vixens of the night selling their souls;
Temptresses tempted from a devilish stare,
Distressed heartbeats frolic with my touch,
Permeating aromas of luscious blood fill my senses,
Rampant repression of morals stomp upon my subdued soul,
Pierced! Ravaged! Delectable!
Inhibited animalistic tendencies are gone,
A slovenly woman loses this battle of wills.
Steadily a hand creeps upon my shoulder,
Whispers devastate my ears…
Till “Death” Do Us Part!


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02-17-2007 Walter Jones    

Clever well versed, smooth thought process, images in place, nicely done, Walt


01-02-2007 Chessie Hodge    

I love this poem. It is creepy and haunting in a good way. The tone is perfect for the concept and it is beautifully descripted. There are maybe two places that it sounds a little forced or strange but the overall effect is not damaged. This one is going on my list of recommended reading!!! Keep up the good work.


12-28-2006 Alma H.    

I don't really think the rhyming was forced at all. It was all very good. I have a friend that might love to read this over and over again. A little dark for her but still its really good. Keep it up. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.


01-30-2006 James Shammas    

I think this is a cool concept, like a marriage to the devil. I think the laguage is a bit over the top: too descriptive, like you are trying a bit too hard. But the concept works.

Jim


01-30-2006 Jack Curson    

Well, I don't like this write but I posted it none the less.


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