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Roses and Candy
by Anthony Lane Stahlhut (Age: 47)
copyright 01-28-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Roses and Candy
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Walking along I happened to see,
a beautiful sight, thought this one's for me.
I followed her home to get her name.
Hoping that she, might feel the same.

For days I watched her from across the street.
Wishing I had the courage, to be able to meet.
Then on Valentine's Day, I thought it'd be dandy.
I went out and bought her, a dozen Roses and Candy!

I bought her a card that said I love you.
I wished she'd be able to love me, too!
I got home to find, something on my door.
A Valentine card, but I didn't know what for.

I opened the card and was delighted to see.
That she was smitten and in love with me.
So I ran to her house to confess all my love.
why'd it take so long,push come to shove.

Now that so many years have gone by.
I remember way back and have to sigh.
Eight grandkids around life is so dandy.
All because of, a dozen Roses and Candy!


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02-27-2006 David Pekrul    

Oh, how often it happens that the one that a person loves, is one that has been in their lives for so many years. My son was married in May, 2005, to a girl he has known since Grade Two, yet they were both 700 miles from their home-town when they found each other.
Ain't love grand!
02-15-2006 Veera Das    

A romantic theme that rhymes well.The last verse wraps it up nicely. This poem almost reads like a ballad.
Needs a little more editing though-Line 2 and the last line of the second last para need to start with a capital letter to lend uniformity. This would add a finishing touch to a poem which shoots straight from the heart!

Veera
01-30-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Great Anthony. Valentines Day is really your time of year. You seem to shine! I really liked the last stanza a lot. I wish I had thought of it first. ~only joking~

Good read,

Rich
01-28-2006 James Shammas    

Really! All those grandkids, at your young age! A lot of love here, but I miss the raunchy stuff from the last poem! Just kidding. Nice write.

Jim
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