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Happened
by Vicki G.
copyright 02-25-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
at night
i feel un-right
only my breath
and not yet wishing for my death
just- just crying…

what happened to me?
the perfect girl?
but now i’m free
i can really twirl

follow behind
far away
listening footsteps
falling limitations
it’s left me
the safety of his arms
has gone
with the rest of me

what happened to me?
the perfect girl?
but now i’m free
i can really twirl

whispering nights
freezing dreams
love-less hearts
he has
torn me apart
he thought we were rushing
flailing around
now i can’t believe
it’s over…

what happened to me?
the perfect girl?
but now i’m free
i can really twirl

and now it’s done
and all the fun
has drained out…
goodbye.


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03-12-2006 Erin G.    

hey vicki!

I really liked this poem. The stanza
"what happened to me?
the perfect girl?
but now i’m free
i can really twirl"

was great. I loved the imagery that came with reading this poem. Great job!

xoxo Erin
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