Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID

password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Walter Jones
Shamara Ryan
2 Writers

0 Free Members

2 Members
22 Guests

Just For A Day
by Erin G. (Age: 14)
copyright 02-19-2006


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
I can't remember all the times I cried,
That day they told me that you had died.

You? That's impossible I said,
They told me you died in a hospital bed.

You would never give up, you were too strong,
Alas, some peoples lives are taken so wrong.

What about the baby, is she okay?
She didn't get to live, not even a day.

They say that you're in a better place,
That doesn't care about religion or race.

Please come back, just for a day,
There are so many things that I forgot to say.

R.I.P Gina Baker, and her unborn baby.

I still can't seem to get over their death, even though it happened over a year ago.


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry


Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

08-12-2006 Robert Betts    

I'm sorry about the loss. But beyond that this is an excellent piece as well as a fine tribute.
Keep writing.


08-12-2006 Jessica L.    

This is really really sad, I hate how death can come at an instant!


06-23-2006 BJ Niktabe    

Yes, this is a very sad subject, but you did it justice with your writing. I remember my favorite teachers were always the ones that were pregnant, and they left before the school year was up. It was sad just dealing with that, but for it to be so permanent as death! I can't even imagine how that hurt!

Good write!

BJ


04-16-2006 Shannon W.    

Death is a painful issue to deal with. Especially if it's someone close. People die everyday form good and bad causes. Sometimes it's not fair. It's ashame the baby did survive to see this world. Think on the bright side, maybe that baby wasn't supposed to be born into this cold world, were people die from unnecessary things.


Visitor Reads: 361
Total Reads: 381
Comments: 4

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:





Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats