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Ahhh, something we all love about writing. The way it started reminds me of a non-dark version of my poem Lines. That's why I write, to escape my world and hid awake in a world of fantasy that I control and created. One thing that I love about PnP is it lets me let people know about the worlds I've created with my words. And I need to give a big thanks to my keyboard, for I have horribly handwriting. :) Even though, most people say, "I couldn't write without the influence of my parents!" and that like, but me, I write to get away from my parents. When I get writers block, it's because I'm forced to be around my parents and they've depressed me beyond words. Anyhow, the flow and rhythm of this poem is great. You've given it great descriptions, and aside from the need of capital letters it's perfect. From reading all of your works, I can see how greatly you've matured in writing. Keep up the great work!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
This is just what I love about writing! You can just create your own world and it doesn't have any rules or anything! It's like you're the creator of a new world. ^^ Great write