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All the Way
by Anne-marie Hewlett (Age: 18)
copyright 02-08-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  All the Way
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2 years and a month I know
I’ve been hearing you asking me
“How long do I have to wait?”
“And how long do I have to keep on suffering?”

Just kiss these lips and just hold my hand
I want you to take me for who I am
I need you to understand
Because taking the next step is not in my plan

I might let you touch me
I might let you come over tonight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

I can always tease you
I’ll squeeze you tight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

You’re friends are laughing at your waiting
Saying you should find someone else
But can a girl give you the tender touch
That I seem to own

Patience is what you got to have
you know it takes a lot to be my man
I’m not that much of tease
But I love seeing you beg, shouting “Please?!”

I might let you touch me
I might let you come over tonight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

I can always tease you
I’ll squeeze you tight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

You know I love you
You just have to know
That if your not willing to wait
Than you've got to go

Don’t stare at the calendar
It’s not going to go that fast
I promise your time will come
You just have to wait and see

I might let you touch me
I might let you come over tonight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

I can always tease you
I’ll squeeze you tight
I might let you kiss me
But we’re not going all the way tonight

Take you your time and just wait
One day, we’ll go all the way


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05-18-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Hi Anne-Marie,

This is so beautiful, and very well-written. Every time I read each story again, I feel as though I should have picked that one, and this is true of yours. God I wish I could have picked more than one winner.

Rich


02-08-2006 William Muth    

anne-marie,
your armor is sturdy. The best is always worth waiting for. I like the recurring verses in between the each succeeding new one. It seems to build on the tension of the piece. I'm talking like a musician, I used to have a band and any lyric or song was called a "piece".
I am teaching myself poetry forms and I know this form but the mind is blank. However, my opinion is if the poem can convey tension or emotion like a chapter in a book or a scene in a movie, it's achieved it's purpose, and this has. very well done, anne marie


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