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This is so beautiful, and very well-written. Every time I read each story again, I feel as though I should have picked that one, and this is true of yours. God I wish I could have picked more than one winner.
anne-marie,
your armor is sturdy. The best is always worth waiting for. I like the recurring verses in between the each succeeding new one. It seems to build on the tension of the piece. I'm talking like a musician, I used to have a band and any lyric or song was called a "piece".
I am teaching myself poetry forms and I know this form but the mind is blank. However, my opinion is if the poem can convey tension or emotion like a chapter in a book or a scene in a movie, it's achieved it's purpose, and this has. very well done, anne marie