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I looooooooved this! it was really sad, and made me feel for the narrator. This had great flow and rhymes. I like how your thoughts grew and transitioned throughout the poem. very well written. the last two lines of the 2nd stanza could be reworded so they don't have too many syllables. But besides that, i loved it! great job!
This is a sweet poem. It hurts to walk away and say good bye, but sometimes it is for the best. I dont know what your situation was but I would not wait for the guy to come back because he might think you hate and befor you know it he might have another girl.
I love the flow of the rhyme in this poem, the strong emotions you used.....amazing. I just loved it. You are a very talented writer, Haley. Keep it up!
Wow! Is this supposed to be a tragic love poem or something? Because it is GREAT! I love it! It rhymes perfectly, and I love the title! And the spelling and grammar was perfect too! And I love the the last two lines, "But all of my words could not satisfy my thoughts of you". What a FANTASTIC ending!!!! GREAT JOB, HALEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Running after the one you love, searching to no avail, destine to never meet again. Dark and painful emotions we shall all feel. We're all a prisoner of this world and we can't escape it. The pain of heartbreak as cracked the glass of all of our hearts. Running after your love in the pouring rain no chains to stop you. Only question is...shall you find him?
Wow...it even rhymed! I can't make more than one line rhyme, another words I such at rhyming. You don't need punctuation at the end of each line but other than the the poem is perfect!
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