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This is a little *cough* childish. So you like to write dark? A lot of people on here do, if you haven't already noticed. It was good, but there is a point. You must really want penguins to talk. That wasn't what the point was. *cough* It seems like you're saying everything is all good till its gone. Some people will just take advantage of everything and everybody just to get what they want. in this case, you waited patiently for them to get what they wanted and they left. Sounds like an old boyfriend you don't want around, but you don't know how to tell him off. then he realizes that he was bad and wishes he still had you, but he wasted his chance. Just another point of view... It looks nice to a 12 year old, but many people a few years older will get a grasp at it and whip around in all sorts of direction, finally pointing to the right point. Anyway, it was really good. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
I guess the underwear gnomes were booked that night...
It's a uniquely frivolous concept yet with a deeper perspective attached. Some of the verse was a bit strained, but given the fun nature it's definitely an enjoyable read. It would also make a great children's book ala Dr. Seuss.
I thought it was funny until I read it a second time and really understood the point you were trying to make. So many people think bad of things at first and then finally realize when something is gone that we actually liked it or loved it and didn't take it for what it was when it was around. I think that is why we cry when a pet dies, or a favorite something is lost. This one made me wonder what you missed about the penguins when they left was it that they kept things interesting and now you see that they were right about you being boring. I think this poem is kinda sad when you truly analyze it. Great poem Tiffany.
hehe...I always thought it was the dryer eating them, but I think I'll put a trap in my sock drawer now. I've got to put an end to it somehow! This is such a fun piece!
Thats where all my socks are going! I always wondered what was happening to them! This was very cute and I knew there were good times in your life! Anthony
I believe you!!!!I believe you!!! I think that there are penguins in my drawers to. All my socks are disappearing or getting holes in them. Penguins are my favorite animal. This poem made me laugh. I really enjoyed your poem. Keep up the good work.
Toni Sweeney
Now, just what colour are those little pills you are taking? lol
This is really cute. You have a strange imagination, but somehow it works for you.
--hands her a seal wearing mukluks---
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