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Thoughts at Three ...
by Veera Das
copyright 02-25-2006


Age Rating: 4 to 127

  Thoughts at Three ...
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They try to tell me, although I'm three,
That stars aren't magic lamps you see,
Or, they don't exist and died before me.
As if to say, I must agree,
Just because I sit on their knee.
But I know better, for I am three.

I am three,(with perhaps a month or two more,
They tell me quite soon, I will be four.)
But if there's a knock, I don't open the door-
For even at three, you can never be sure,
If its a giant, a cross-eyed lemur,
Or a scary doctor with a nasty cure.

I am three, and I know more than my friends,
Where a rainbow begins and where it ends
What it is made of and why it bends,
When in the sky, like magic, it blends-
Who that candy to three year olds sends,
How it is colored and why it pretends.

My daddy says he's thirty-three,
Isn't it strange, he knows less then me.




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03-08-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Veera,

This such a beautiful piece of work. You have such talent, such a rich way with words, and arranging them in just the right order. It's much better than anything I could come up with.

Thank you for making my day.
I will read this many times in years to come.
This is truly a mind-sticker.

Rich
03-02-2006 Mike Macdonald    

This is a wonderfully cute poem, but a few lines sound a bit awkward, particularly in the third stanza. I would proofread this a bunch more times and maybe think of some variants to the word choices you use. This could be a really good piece with a little more work. Keep writing, I like your stuff a lot!
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