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This is a very good piece! Even though we all are trapped in cages when you think of it. If you have friends or loved ones you're in a cage. Even though there's the cages you walk into, the ones you fall into, and the ones you're pulled into. This kind of reminds me of my poem, Black Wings. Dreams, hopes, and goals are what keep us going and moving forward no matter what stands in front of us and barricading us. You need to be happy with yourself, but still always be working for something else.
You've got a few grammar mistakes, such as "teeney" it's "teeny." ^-^ You did a good job with this, and I suggest start each line with a capital letter. Good work, keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Those are lofty dreams, but it is dreams that make life worth living. Change is brought on by those that dream of better things and then try to make it better for those that come after. You can fly and you make my heart happy knowing you are trying to get better things for more than selfish reasons. I wish you the best and give you my love in spirit. Anthony