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Snowman
by Mehrina B. (Age: 13)
copyright 03-02-2006


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
Ahh! Winter, my season,
How I thrive in the cold!
The snow is lashing,
But I stand bold!

The snow builds on me,
I grow bigger and stronger!
Soon I’ll be very powerful,
OOOHH!! I can’t wait any longer!

But wait, what’s that I sense?
A warm, fresh feeling
Oh no, it’s not what I fear most
OH NO! IT'S SPRING!

I have to run away
Where remain winter’s dregs
Goodness, I forgot!
I don’t have any legs!

But the warmth grows stronger
And I shrink smaller
I’m melting away
Oh no! I’m a goner!

WHADDOIDO???
My life sped in a blur
Oh well, I suppose
There’s always next winter!

*Very corny! Hope you like it!


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03-05-2008 Eric Gasparich    

A clever idea. The death of a snowman.

We just got 6.7 inches of snow here, but the clouds broke about ten yesterday morning, and a lot of the snow melted in the rest of the day.

The poem is well-rhymed for the most part, and I find little to harp on.

Well done.


02-05-2007 Lisa A.    

I like this poem a lot! Lots of my friends LOVE winter and the spring, however, I hate it! My school was even canceled today because it was so cold. Nevertheless, I like this poem. Hope you don't melt this year!

~*Lisa*~


11-25-2006 Kay Murphy    

I adore winter as well and this poem only brought me excitement once again. I love this poem and find it not "corny" but actually wonderful.
Kay


04-25-2006 Jessica P.    

This is cute, I like it! I never xcould've come up with something like that...maybe I need to excersize my imagination...it doesn't seem to be working well lately. Anyway,Gret job keep writing!


03-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Another well-written poem by the eibunpou (English grammar) kikei (freak). How is your friend Leigh, sawa-pikurusu-san (the sour pickle)?

Add four more stanzas and enter my contest. It will be a breeze for you. C'mon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rick-san


03-14-2006 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I was going to read this, but want to enter this contest and don't want to use any of your ideas. So I will come back. good luck! Anthony


03-06-2006 Haley R.    

Hey, Mehrina-chan, this is your first poem for a while, and I think it's VERY cute! I like how you had the person telling the story be a snowman, it just made it more cute! I liked it, it's a perfect way to start off the spring. This REALLY lightened up my day. I was in a deepressed mood. Anyway, Great Job! I can't wait for you to submit more this Spring!!

Keep it up!
None Other Than,
Haley-chan


03-03-2006 David Pekrul    

This is cute, Mehrina. I imagine that only snowman really love winter; I'm sure the rest of us can do without it.



03-02-2006 Leigh G.    

lol, yes corny and I like it. ;) Since the poem required spelling and grammar flaws I can't complain can I? Good work, this is a cute little poem. I hope to see some dark poem though. It has the common cute poem flow and the only thing that could make it more snowman like is rhymes. But since rhymes annoy me, it's good that there aren't any. Looks like I'm the lucky first comment and hit. ;) Good work!

May the divine darkness be with you,
Your friend,
Leigh-chan
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