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Moonlit Dreamer
by Amanda C. (Age: 17)
copyright 03-03-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Once upon a moonlit night,
A dreamer slept alone.
With silver wings, these dreams took flight.
The dreamer turned to stone.

To cast away your love, forlorn.
To wish that you were never born.
To run, to trip, to fall, to cry,
To wince in pain, and smile, and die-
But never turn to stone.

The moss has grown.
The wind has blown.
Death has claimed her tyrant throne.
Bathed in Autumn's sweet cologne,
Her heart was then soon carved to bone,
Until her empty soul was shone.

The muffled cries which past, still drone.
Emotions: Too disloyal, disown.
All she was told, all she had known,
Was how to hold her lonesome own.


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06-26-2006 Jackie Edwards    

I love how you wrote this. I could picture it in my head as I was reading it. Excellent work. :D
04-19-2006 Walter Jones    

A touch of sound in the sing song, image laid warm to page, style adds with time, Walt
04-09-2006 Caitlin N.    

Your poem is probably one of the best I have ever read. I love the rhyming pattern, and the emotions you can feel from this poem. Keep writing. You have an amazing talent. I hope you continue.

Lov Ya Caitlin
03-24-2006 Jessica P.    

This is a great poem and it looks like it took a lot of time. Very well written, but the rythem changes quite ferquently.
03-09-2006 Anne-marie Hewlett    

Like Alma.B said, This is great and every line rhymed. It's hard to do that these days but at least one person can still do it:) Good work.
03-08-2006 Alma H.    

It is a great poem that has a lot of potential. I noticed that almost every line rhymed with each other. Keep up the great work.
03-05-2006 David Pekrul    

This is quite good in its content and expression. I do find, however, that the rhythm changes from stanza to stanza. I liked the rhytm in the first stanza, now if you could just make each one the same, you would have a great poem.
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