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Winters Day
by Frederick Van Kirk
copyright 03-26-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Winter day.

Ma hart's near ta brak,
wen I remember ma daddy`;
Fightin, traying ta claim doun with me mum.
An tha uncles crayin, holdin em back, wisperen,

"Tha laddie, yer little laddie."
He trid to stratin he self a bit, gather back
Wha dignity he cou save.
Sum light, a little, com back ta his mad eyes.
He come an eld me clase then.
As we his body, he ca sheld me,
Sheld us, fome tha grave.

He trayed but cou'na stand,
An sat doun before me on ha ground.
His eyes looked up at me, he move is mouth.
Ba cou'na make na sound.
Then, he howled, such a wounded howl.
Torn in half, tha winters day.
An late at night, wen yella moon is brite,
I sumtimes howl that way.




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04-03-2006 Roger Crique    

This was quite an experience for me. It was as if I was reading in another language, which made it very interesting. I mean the good interesting! The accent actually gives this work a very down to earth tone. The imagery, which is what I enjoy most in any poetry, is very intelligently crafted. Although the those involved in the plot speak a very Southern or Australian accent, the fluidity is quite good. I really enjoyed this one.


03-26-2006 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Words don't always send the feelings that are written about, but this seems to take you to the site and gives you the feeling of being right there with the family at the fathers bedside! I like the way you wrote this and will have to look at some more of your works, Anthony


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