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05-07-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Thank you for entering my contest Darkness & Fear! You win 3rd place! (Mary ran away with the win.) :) I'll be starting two new contest, so please look into them!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders!
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04-29-2006
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
They always say that the end is simply the beginning of something new, and I have to agree with that statement, especially when it comes to theater (harder it is to accept this analogy with a lost loved one though). And something so special, that you've worked so hard on, doesn't ever die or doesnt' really ever end... if you let it live on within you, in your heart, in your mind, in your memories... and especially so if you let it become PART of you! What do you think?
Very good... thank you for sharing it.
BrytEyz
of the Commenting Crusaders
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04-14-2006
David Pekrul
I think this poem says it all, with all the emotions and feelings on the special day, at the end of the play.
I know the feeling somewhat, as I was involved with the Alberta High School of Fine Arts for ten years doing front-of-house work with their stage group called "Main Stage". It is so hard to describe the feelings when the curtain falls on the final day of production. You have expressed them as well as can be done.
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03-19-2006
Eric Carrillo
Endings are always hard, but they can be easier if we look forward to the next project. In truth, there really isn't an end, one act end and the next one begins.
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03-15-2006
Richard Reed Jr
Wow! Amazingly haunting piece This is like Edgar Allen Poe. The haunting refrain in my opinion is:
All that remains
Is
Silence
I think it would be more haunting if you repeated it when you closed.
Like:
The theater is dark
All that remains
Is
Silence.
Anyway, super piece!
Rich
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03-12-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
She is alive! She submits two tings in one month! It must be a new year! ;)
This is a very dark piece. It's rather fitting to the less than happy visions I've been having recently. Silence is the deepest and darkness part of our worlds. There is no such thing as utter silence, that is possible of being achieved in this world. There is always some haunting dying sound echoing in the deepest darkness of a cold and rainy night. Good work as always. You don't totally need punctuation, but I do like how you made this in normal poetry form. Prose is good, but can get a bit on the drawn out side.
May the divine silence of the darkness be with you,
Leigh
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