I'll Be the Other Woman
by
Debra Rose
(Age: 21)
copyright 03-16-2006
Age Rating: 18 to 127
Title:
I'll be The Other Woman
or Affair (She Doesn't Need To Know a Thing)
Burn me steady,
here in your hold
I promise to you
she'll never know.
I'll keep my lips sealed
and I'll close my eyes.
Anything, anything
to have you deep inside.
My passion is burning,
broiling and hot,
your scent sends me yearning
for what I should not
desire--forbidden,
you're not mine to hold,
but my need, it is yours
to touch and to mold.
Emotions are nothing,
this is just lust,
friends with our benefits?
Oh, the benefits robust.
I'll give you hot joy,
with dripping wet skies,
anything, anything
to have you 'tween my thighs.
She can have your days,
let me rule your nights,
no love or relationships,
just fantastic highs.
I'll be the "other woman",
we can reenact your dreams.
I'll never speak a word,
she'll never know a thing.
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I always hated the other woman because she knows better! Having read this I understand her point of view now and I still despise the other woman. No man of her own that she can keep so she goes after one that she can easily discard when finished with...leaving behind broken hearts and families... Shame on the other woman!
I Loved the poem though.
I believe there can't be another woman unless the person cheating is weak. And it's too easy for all three to be hurt in the end. But getting to the poem, the intense emotion, the exciting thrill, the triangle that the unfortunate other woman has allowed herself to be trapped into...you've caught it all. This is good!
Wow! I could sense a lot of emotion while reading this poem. I could relate to what you were writing about. keep up the good work, I'll be looking forward to more like this one good job.
My blood pressure spiked, I hope you're proud of yourself. Dang, is it hot in here all of a sudden? Then why do I have the chills? I love this piece lots and lots! Your poems are glorious, I hope you write and share them forever. Keep it up Tex! RvsB love for all! *hugs* Great job.
OK, now I have to take a cold shower! lol
This poem says it all. It is burning with lust. If only lust like this could be had without anyone getting hurt; but alas, there is always a price to pay.
I'm with Tabitha. This is spicy, mouth watering, had to-never mind that. Its great definitely changed my view on reads like these, I'll be looking for more good job.
okay i usually don't like stuff bout cheating...brings back too many memories but i love this i love how you captured the essence of an affair esspecially this part:you're not mine to hold, but my need, it is yours to touch and to mold. Emotions are nothing, this is just lust, ...
oh just so chilling but i have to ask.... are emotions really nothing can you really give yourself to someone knowing that they belong to someone else... i think your poem even sort of hints at this...good job well done...
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