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Come Back
by Lauren T. (Age: 14)
copyright 02-23-2008


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Come Back
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This is dedicated to my best friend who was lost in her depression, its a song for her.
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Life seems bad
The second day is always worse
Its hard to live when there is a hole in your heart
that seems to tear you apart
and you've shut your ears to the ones who care about you
You've shut your eyes
but please realize
Its not okay to do this day after day
just find a way
Because...

You're being so dumb
When you think the world has won
The battle raging in your heart
Tearing you apart
You've broken into nothing
I hope you know this one thing

Come back, Come back, come back

Its so confusing
when it seems like you are loosing
That battle that is killing you
What should you do?
You should open your eyes
so you can realize
that you are being slowly taken
Slowly breaken
into two
and I cry because there's nothing I could do
for you

You're being so dumb
When you think the world has won
The battle raging in your heart
Tearing you apart
You've broken into nothing
I hope you know this one thing

Come back, Come back, come back
Come back, Come back, come back
Please

I know you feel alone
Its like you can't go home
and your lost
what's the cost
to get you back?
Life isn't over yet
Its not yet
so come back...

You're being so dumb
When you think the world has won
The battle raging in your heart
Tearing you apart
You've broken into nothing
I hope you know this one thing
Please come back


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03-21-2008 Irina Guschina    

You can not even know how often we all (adult) say "Come back, come back, come back"...
Your feelings are so pure... Really I like your work. Keep writing, dear friend! And waiting for... Irina.


03-21-2008 Frank Fields    

This is, indeed, a heart-rending account of a plea that had to fall upon deaf ears. These things were said, before, I'm sure in many ways and, aye, sometimes the only way that grief will pass is to recount it as it was and present it to the sympathetic ears and hearts of those who will truly listen. Thank you sharing this with us.

Frank :)
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