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The Collision of Our Hearts
by Erin G. (Age: 14)
copyright 07-24-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
If only I could take all your fears away,
Take your tears, and cast them aside.
Watching you break, and fall away,
As our dreams begin to collide.

Your smiling and happy face,
Will ultimately be my demise.
Remembered moments, which I can't place,
As I look into your eyes.

Would you leave me, can you see me,
Watching you shatter and fall apart?
Your eyes burn like acid, for me to bleed.
As our dreams end, with the collision of our hearts.



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09-06-2006 Nancy Pawley    

Erin, this poem has depth of meaning seeming to go far beyond your 12 years of age. Keep up the good work.
Nancy
08-31-2006 Euna P.    

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wow... what an amazing poem. the flow, the message, the... everything!!!!
08-25-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Collision is a forceful word as are they forceful things in the universe. Your poem is a collision that hits home to my heart. This is an awesome poem and I can feel the collisions going on in the mind of the poet's voice.

Outstanding piece. I'm glad I ran into your site. Good poetry. I will be back.

Your new PnP friend,

Rich (also from Maryland)
08-07-2006 Tabitha Beaudin    

Erin, this is a very beautiful and breathtaking piece. I feel your frustration and pain in this poem. You write very vividly, and these words are quite expressive.

Awsome, Awsome, Awsome, writing Tabby.
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