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I Don't Want To Care
by Jessica P. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-12-2006

Age Rating: 10 to 127

I don't want to worry
It's causing too much pain
But it's hard to forget
Like a day in the rain

Yet I no longer shed tears
For you or anyone else
'Cause I just don't want to care
Anymore than the ringing bells

It's hard to let go
But somehow happens over time
But just tell me what's wrong
So I can be happy as pie

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07-07-2008 Brooke M.

Sad heartwrenching poem...but a poem I can relate to. Sometimes our emotions become numb,,,and we don't want to feel in order to prevent more pain...it so true and struggle I deal with everyday. Not caring seems to help, but does more damage than good.
A great peom...hold such truth

05-27-2006 Sam Hackel-Butt

I think I love your poems. Either that, or you and I think alike. I LOVE walking in the rain. I love rain, period. The last stanza really hit home, because of problems I've had with friends about how they'd bottle up everything, and only tell me bits and pieces of what was wrong. What they told me made me worry endlessly, until I'd snap.

No critiques, except the last stanza. One sentence too long, no rhyme. It's a bit out of place.

-Sam
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04-29-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball

It's hard not to care once you have, but like a knife's edge that gets overly used... it simply dulls with time. So, too, the sharpness of pain... any kind of pain. Time has a way of healing it, you know?

Thanks for posting this and for entering the contest. I just love our PnP family!

BrytEyz
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I Don't Want To Care by Jessica P. (Age: 15) copyright 04-12-2006 Age Rating: 10 to 127

I Don't Want To Care
by Jessica P. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-12-2006

Age Rating: 10 to 127