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04-25-2006
Jessica Peters
This was a great poem, although it didn't always rhyme, it always cept in good flow. And never think yu're boring, cause you're not. Noone can truly say that they're boring, maybe it's just the fact that they havn't found the right people to socailize with yet.Great job though, I loved it!
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03-27-2006
Richard Reed Jr
konbanwa Best friend,
when am I going to see your loving and trusting twin, who really rules you anyway? Your rationaliy always come thrugh so clear. Fot the most part, this was a well writtenpoem. I think you could have chopped down some of those lon lnes. Words to remember. A poet mkes his points only once, then quickly moves on, That's what the reader likes. ~shifty eyes~^_^
Good write. I only spend this much time with my best friends.
anata no tamadachi,
Rick-san
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