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I Might Succeed
by David Pekrul
copyright 03-26-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Impossible,
Quite impossible,
I’ll never succeed,
But I will try,
I’ll never know until I try it at least once,
And one try is all I may ever really need,
And I might succeed,
If I try,
Just once,
Maybe.


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04-12-2006 Deone Wiley    

The tetractys is a five line poem consisting of 1/2/3/4/10 syllables. That is a total or 20 syllables. A double tetractys reverses the syllable count. That is 1/2/3/4/10/10/4/3/2/1. That is a total of 40 syllables. Your poem seems to count words. While it is a nice poem, it is not the form you want.
03-27-2006 James Shammas    

There is a wonferful symmetry to the content that mirrors the obvious symmetry to the form-- the way the first half of the poem expresses negativity and the second half responds with at least some confidence and affirmation. The form of the cross-- at least for Christians-- is also not without significance.

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