A man of true perfection
I remain lost in your warm, provocative gaze
How your thick, rough hair blows in the wind
I melt with your tender kiss
Mine for eternity
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This is a great poem. I especially like the last line "Mine for eternity". It just seems to fit the poem. I also like the beginning line, too. It starts off the poem nicely.
I especially like the line "I melt with your tender kiss." It makes me think of butterflies in one's stomach when you kiss someone you like for the first time.
Ah, what would life be without our dreams... eh? I'm glad you're sharing yours with us. Thank you. And if you ever read my works... I, too, believe in "True Love" and "Prince Charming" and so forth... for I am a princess through and through on the inside. :-)
Just the thought of this wonderful guy is making me jelous and evnyous. I really long for a boyfriend, but i know some day I will find my prince. Hav eyou found yours?
This poem, I must say, says a lot with very little. This is not easy to do. The imagery is very well conceived, despite the obvious attempt of the author to keep the descriptive quality of the poem to a minimum. This is also difficult to do! There is a very good flow to this poem and I love the balance these few words have, which gives me the impression that the author knew exactly where she wanted to go with this poem, the right way! I am quite impress with this one! Great job, Elisabeth!
It's fair. I just don't believe in perfection or princes. Once a friend of mine said, "When will my prince come and save me?" She was only kidding, but when I ever hear about "prince charming" I always think to myself, "I'd rather rescue myself." All the same this is short, but I got the point. I hope to see some more work soon.
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Welcome !
