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In A Mess
by David Pekrul
copyright 04-01-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I can barely find my way,
My life is in a mess,
Cannot tell my night from day,
I can barely find my way,
Black and white is simply gray,
And life is full of stress,
I can barely find my way,
My life is in a mess.


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05-24-2006 Jessica P.    

Very nice, and that was a triolet...right? I'm not quite sure, but that's what it semmed like. Anyway well done and it had a nice flow and rythm.
04-12-2006 Deone Wiley    

Nice triolet! I seem to be the only one who noticed the form. I hoope the thought is not autobiographical!
04-10-2006 Jessica P.    

I like this one^^! It's nice and short nd has lot's of feeling and emotions in it. Umm...maybe for more ideas on what to right, cuz I know you said you were having kind of a writers block, maybe you could try doing like fantasy stuff or something?
04-08-2006 Daniel R Patton    

You have been spying on me again haven't you David? Hang on!, WHAT WAS THAT? IS THAT YOU OUT FRONT DAVID? This is short and directly to the point. (of my life that is.) I love it. THANKS
04-04-2006 Mike Macdonald    

Man, this could apply to so much. A person in a troubled family...Someone suffering Alsheimer's...College students. It's funny how the shortest poems get you thinking the most, and this is proven in my literary history classes.

To the point and certainly feels like it's in a muddle of its own with the way it reads, with one line teetering on the others. Not too bad. I'll spot it a fiver so it might see the front page. Last I checked we've had a comment shortage.
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