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The Darkened Window
by Jessica L. (Age: 14)
copyright 06-01-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  The Darkened Window
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Staring out the window black
Silence and darkness take claim
Watching helplessly from the void
As the storm engulfs my soul


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03-16-2007 Bunny Franz    

Very short, but it had a nice feel to it. Kind of bleak. I givvit a four out of five, one point less only because It's really kind of short.
09-06-2006 Maria Alvarado    

Nice job could have been longer but right to the point made ma cry though nice picture
08-14-2006 Erin G.    

Hi Jessica,

I really enjoyed this poem. It flowed nicely when I read it. The only problem is, it is too short! :) Very good job.

xo Erin
06-25-2006 Tabitha Beaudin    

Opps I wanted to give you more praise points, I hit the wrong button. I also wanted to let you know that this was the second time reading this, and I still love it, but really I wanted more. So here's the other two praise points. Sorry bout that. (Since I meant to give you five all together, and I accidently hit 3.)

Tabby.
06-25-2006 Tabitha Beaudin    

Jessica, this is my kind of poem. I loved it, also to give nod to you for using such an awsome pic. If I found anything wrong with this it is the fact that I wanted more!
06-11-2006 Angela Toshner    

short but sweet, really to the point, love it!
angela
06-10-2006 Haley R.    

Hey, nice poem. It's a little darker than your other one you wrote. I like the variety in your poems. I also like the last line a lot:

"As the storm engulfs my soul"

It's a nice metaphor.

Great Job!

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Haley
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