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Doves Tree (haiku)
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 04-09-2006


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White dove in a tree.
I looked at him and saw
your dove-like soul.




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03-11-2008 Eric Gasparich    

I have trouble with non-Japanese haiku as I am pretty certain there is more to it than just three lines with 5,7 and 5 countable syllables. I am fond of packing as much meaning into as few words as a possible, and since that is highly prized in haiku, it is a form I ought to take a closer look at.

You've done a lot of haiku, and they are quite nice, but this one definitely stands out. It is a fine, crisp, clean transposition from the dove in the tree to one with whom you are watching it, with no wasted effort.

Well done again.
04-13-2006 Walter Jones    

This is my son in whom I am well pleased, loosen your sandals and walk in the heavens with God, always on the edge of perfection, Walt
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