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Echo
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 04-09-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
(haiku)

Just one lasting sigh
across all mountains and sea.
Sighing of our hearts...


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09-25-2007 Shannon W.    

This was a very good read. You did it perfectly, It did not need many lines to get the scence across. Job well done.

Shannon
04-23-2006 Tigran Israelyan    

Good.
Climbing following mountain,
We fields also contain;
Take care for us: Native Land mother:
Bless and give us your presents: Only God father.
04-19-2006 Walter Jones    

Some poets touch hearts, you find a way to lift the mind and soul as one, so special you are. White roses cover my eyes seeing... Walt
04-19-2006 Emily Garwood    

Your Back i haven't seen you around in AGES!!! Well i have been away alot too so it could be that :S ANYWAYS i like your poem it's true it says alot in such through words and the number of syllables seems fine to me!!! great JOB SEE YOU AROUND!
04-16-2006 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Echoes throughout time
Heard when list'ning to me breathe
Escape in a sigh

(Sigh)... I love your works... and so oft' they inspire me to such an extent... I can't stop thinking the thoughts your poetry instilled until I write one of my own. Thank you for sharing your talent, thank you for being my muse on more than one occasion. You are very appreciated here at PnP!
04-14-2006 David Pekrul    

This is a great Haiku. I really like this style of poem. I'm not sure if you have edited this since Deone's comment, but I see 5,7,5 and that's just the way it should be.
04-12-2006 Deone Wiley    

Nice thought. Haiku require syllables of 5,7,5. Your poem has 5,7,4. You might tweak it to see if you can add the one syllable.
04-10-2006 Daniel R Patton    

This says so much, in so few words, it speaks volumes. Heart's crying out for all eternity and echo's being carried forevermore. I LOVE THIS PIECE, GREAT JOB, DANIEL
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