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by Deone Wiley
copyright 04-11-2006
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Age Rating: 18 to 127

 
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?
What color describes a silent scream?
Do I wear black for a broken dream?
What kalidescope unfolds life's lifelong scheme?
What brush strokes paint death's telltale chart?
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?


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11-03-2006 Deborah Thomas    

Thought provoking. I find myself wanting to answer your question... with a question...
Doesn't a broken dream in itself come hand in hand with a broken heart?
Clever rhyming sequence.
Be well,
Debbie


04-25-2006 David Pekrul    

Deone,
This is such a great poem, I think it is a shame that it is rated 18+. I think those aged 13+ would enjoy it as well, and I see nothing in the poem that would cause it to be limited to those over 18.
Just a suggestion to lower the age rating.
David


04-14-2006 David Pekrul    

I like this a lot. The Triolet is such a great way to express one's feelings. I have just recently been introduced to this style of writing. Your poem asks many questions, probably all unanswerable, and leave one pondering.


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