Questions
by
Deone Wiley
copyright 04-11-2006 Contest Winner
Age Rating: 18 to 127
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?
What color describes a silent scream?
Do I wear black for a broken dream?
What kalidescope unfolds life's lifelong scheme?
What brush strokes paint death's telltale chart?
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?
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Thought provoking. I find myself wanting to answer your question... with a question...
Doesn't a broken dream in itself come hand in hand with a broken heart?
Clever rhyming sequence.
Be well,
Debbie
Deone,
This is such a great poem, I think it is a shame that it is rated 18+. I think those aged 13+ would enjoy it as well, and I see nothing in the poem that would cause it to be limited to those over 18.
Just a suggestion to lower the age rating.
David
I like this a lot. The Triolet is such a great way to express one's feelings. I have just recently been introduced to this style of writing. Your poem asks many questions, probably all unanswerable, and leave one pondering.