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Across the Sea
by Euna P. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-11-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Across the sea
on the other side of the ball
there's a person
who I call my friend.

She used to be here
but a 12-hour plane flight
took her away
leaving me here.

But we still keep in touch!
We still are friends!
We'll always be friends!
And we'll always be there!

I know she'll always be there
and I vow to be there too.
I have no doubts
that she will always be there.

I miss her alot
and we haven't talked in a while
but I hope soon we can talk
and then I can ask her where she's been.

She'd better come back
or else I'll go over there
and bring her back myself
inside a duffle bag.

I hope you'll come back soon friend
and I'll hope you'll write even sooner.
But come soon
and I'll welcome you with open arms.

I'll welcome you
with open arms
and a smile
and a "Where've you been?"


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04-18-2006 Leigh G.    

Good work! Friends are great relationships that everybody should have. And always remember, you can always have more than just one best friend. So...you're going to take Jane away in a duffel bag? ^-^ This was a great poem, even though you need to fix grammar and spelling. Punctuation, capitalization, sentence context, and that sort need a quick read-over and edit. This is a very good, flowing, and meaningful poem that almost anyone can relate to. Even though...my mission to read all of your works is going to end soon!

May the divine darkness be with you,
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04-18-2006 Alma H.    

That was really good. I once had a friend move away but she didn't move that far away. Though she is in another school district...anyway, I noticed that there needs to be a space between "A" and "Lot" -a lot. To remember that, think of the tallest person in your grade in-between two people holding signs that say "a" space "lot". It works for me. Anyway great poem. Talk to ya' later.
04-11-2006 Jane L.    

WHEE!!!! ITS MY PERSONAL POEM!!!! When are you going to come and take me in a duffel bag?
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