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~Thanks!
I'm pondering the swiftness
with which I can
expedite
the quickest
escape route
to run the path up to
my dreams.
Hindering my doubts
I can survive without
the circle of
false friendship
and deadly,
sinful things.
Vegas is the getaway--
meaning from here
I've got to get away,
escape the prison bars
of neon lights.
I'm mapping out my course now
I've got a goal--
I've got a way out,
and I'm never,
going to look back
on this
fetid city.
I would just like to announce, especially to those who have read my previous works talking about how much I hate Vegas...that I am moving in just a few months! I've found a better college, and a nice place, and this is my feeling of urgency to leave. lol, gotta have two jobs to earn up 4 grand to move ^.^ WOO! But it's worth it!
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Good for you! I went to Vegas for the first time this year and was not TOO impressed. No, neon does not draw me to it's glow... but a nice campground? Yeah, now THAT does! :-) I'm a nature kinda girl I guess. :-) Wish you well and glad you're getting outta there.
Good.
It’s great joy with you to come most close and familiar,
Little by little our contact becoming stronger, my dears;
I feel all deep of your heart and energy your words,
You are truly blessed by Absolute God and poetic gods;
And it’s doubled joy to be with universal angel-muses divisions unison:
Carrying our cross to glory the spiritual battle we are already won.
Well done and to the point.
At last you are biting the bullet. Good for you. It sounds the sort of place that will suck you dry, and I don't mean just the heat.
I wish you every success in your new life.
Brian.
I can certainly feel your urgency to get out of there. A new start is always good, just try to leave any old problems behind and don't take them with you.
I hear Alberta, Canada, near the Canadian Rockies is a nice place to live. lol
Fetid-great word, I love it! Enjoy life, worry about nothing-not too many decisions in life cannot be reversed. I hope you're not leaving PnP, and I hope I am nevver considered a false friend by anyone.
This was a good read, I wish you the best of luck on your move. All those lights, can you tell day from night? here where I am the night sky brings every star in the universe out as a canopy over the landscape. All I can here are the whispers of silence.
Welcome !
