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I suppose this is a good write coming from one so very young. You will improve with time as all things do.
May God bless and keep you.
Mrs. Tigran Israelyan
Ahhh, as Jennifer said, this is a very strong and meaningful poem. You made it relate to a larger crowd, by not saying that it's a friend, loved one, or lover that is being reached for. You did a very good job with this, and it reminds me of many poems and stories that I've written. You've improved greatly, I can really tell since I've read all of your poems now. I singed out and read the one that was over my age rating. :) That was also a very good one, and I can see why you put it up to 13+. For the twelve year olds that are sheltered from the world, it's better not to be exposed to that... For we that are, we sing out and read. This was a very good poem, and aside from the fix-ups that you could do on the grammar, it's an all-around winner. Good work, and keep writing!
May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders