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I'm sorry I walked away...
by Shannon W. (Age: 16)
copyright 04-19-2006


Age Rating: 16 to 127

  I'm sorry I walked away...
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One upon a time there was a beautiful girl named Jenny. Jenny had the best boyfriend ever. Alex. He had all the best features and a guy could possess. Most of all she loved his eyes and back.

They were very much in love and they were inseparable. Jenny stayed at the beach with her grandma. Everyday Alex would come to the beach at a 11:00am to 12:00pm. One day Alex couldn't come over and Jenny needed something to do. So she met up with some guys.

Jenny always wondered what it was like being high, and these guys were smoking pot. She hung out with them and got high. Jenny was so high that she forgot about Alex and had sex with some random guy named Zach. the really sad thing is that she didn't even know his last name!

The next day she couldn't believe what had done. She just kept on telling herself "everything is going to be ok". She told herself that everyday for a month until she realized it really wasn't going to be ok. For a couple of day Jenny had morning sickness really bad. She started to wonder. She went to the nearest drug store and got a home pregnancy test. She was pregnant.

She didn't know what to do or who to tell. She thought about telling her sister or her sister's boyfriend, but she didn't. She turned to the only person she really trusted. Joanne. Joanne was a middle aged women who had no kids and took a liking to Jenny. Jenny told Joanne everything. Joanne didn't yell at her or tell anyone. She was a very understanding person and thats what Jenny really liked about her.

Jenny was crying, crying in Joanne's arms. Between sobs Jenny kept on saying "I can't have this baby...". Joanne made a appointment for the abortion for the next day. The doctor said that it was probably a boy. When Jenny heard that she cried some more. She secretly named him Alex.

The next day Jenny was sitting on a bench by the beach and Alex came up to her and kissed her. She started to cry. She told him everything. She begged him not to say anything or tell anyone. He just stood there, not saying anything. This made her cry even more. She kept on saying she was sorry. He stood up and walked away, Still not saying anything.

When Alex and Jenny first started going out he promised her that he would never walk away from her and their love. When he walked away she knew it was over. Joanne took the sobbing girl back to her house and laid her in her bed. For hours and hours Jenny layed in bed and cried.

About 7:00pm Alex walked in and said "I'm sorry..." "For what? I'm the one who should be sorry!" Jenny cried again. Alex knelt down and kissed her long and deep and then he whispered in her ear "for walking away on our love" and then he kissed her again.


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05-10-2006 Doreen Reynolds    

Hi Shannon

This is the bones of a very good story because, as you say, it is true. It needs padding out with more information and detail. Just three little comments
He had all the best features a guy
"what she had done"
"Jenny lay in bed and cried".

Add more detail and I will read it again.
Doreen


04-24-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Hi Shannon,

In fairness to everyone in my contest, I won't comment on this until the completion of my contest. Thanks for entering.


Rich


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