10-27-2006
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
So much said when nothing is
So much heard in the silence of a sigh
Nothing's here though something is
The emptiness causing my tears to cry
Sometimes... I laugh...
Sometimes I sigh
Thank you all for reading, and Richard... for your heartfelt comments always. THANK YOU!
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10-23-2006
Richard Reed Jr
Very vivid picture
and good job sticking to the Japanese rules
Mary peeks
through her dreams
above the world
Rich
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05-02-2006
Jackie Edwards
Excellent! You stuck to the 5-7-5 rhyming meter perfectly. :) And it is a good subject for a haiku. Haiku are some of my favorite poems to read. Nice job!
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04-29-2006
Irina Guschina
What a lovely poem, Mary!
I was reading with tears…Your haiku is a deep sigh of love! You are right, “Escape in a sigh”! Always and forever! What is more important in love? A sigh! Because just a sigh can express all we have inside us when we are in love…
I am so proud you are inspired by my work! Your poem is very appreciated by me! Thank you, my friend! Your poem is a great gift from you to my heart! I will never forget this fond haiku!
Fondly, Irina.
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04-18-2006
Daniel R Patton
Yes, David, your right and this is inspiration breathing inspiration good job Mary, THANKS DANIEL
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04-16-2006
David Pekrul
We all inspire each other in one way or another. You have been inspired by one of our best and it shows. This is a nice follow-up of Irina's haiku.
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