The Spirits Soul Creation
by
Tigran Israelyan
(Age: 42)
copyright 04-22-2006
Age Rating: 18 to 127
My soul cannot give anyone my spirits crystal storm,
From my spirits crystal storm my soul creative and warm;
I’m missing Promised Land:
Where me saint archangel send.
Atlanta – my dream and reality,
You’re containing eternity;
There lived my Atlantic woman:
She called me saint, master and sweet man.
But I’m just borning poet laureate,
Who can spirits soul create;
I’m keeping hope, believe and love:
And my firebird, she is sometimes swallow, and sometimes dove.
And if in world there is a war,
Let’s it be spirits soul for;
The body is unsteady and empty:
Only spirit and soul are for eternity.
My swan enlightened, and white and bright,
Always smiling and speeded light;
The universal circles melody
Always created harmony.
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I'm sorry, Tigran, I have read a lot of your poety, but I just don't get it. I read a lot of words, but they make no sense to me.
I can tell from your writing that English is not your first language, and maybe that is the problem, or maybe you are just writing above my level of comprehension. I don't know, but I'm really having difficulty with your poems.
I don't mean to be negative, I'm just being honest, and I think that's what this forum is all about.
I will read even more of your work, and perhaps I will eventually start to comprehend.
Voice holds no place to rest, a trip through time and journey keep the image clear. So well the thoughts pass it is a mind trigger sharing thousands of glimpses of life, enjoyed a great deal.. Walt
This is intriguing, thought provoking, and a joy to read, though I agree that the syntax and diction are a bit unconventional. I usually like this, in a Marianne Moore kind of way. I know you've published some poetry, but I don't want that to detract from my critique. This is definitely, an unconventional and original style and I look forward to reading more from you.
Welcome !
