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Age And Remorse (A Tetractys)
by David Pekrul
copyright 04-17-2006


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Age,
Remorse,
But what if,
I need more time.
These things begin to haunt as one ages.

But demons can be killed by one’s resolve;
So look ahead,
And set goals.
Be strong;
Age.


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04-20-2006 Gregory Christiano    

David: you've managed the Tetractys with amazing skill. The verse looks like two reverse hats meeting brim to brim! I believe it's an image poem as well. The message is very clear and strong.
04-18-2006 Daniel R Patton    

I was stopped, dead at my mouse as soon as I had read the 4th line, talk about jumping out of the screen into your lap. I was dumb struck to say the least, yet, for me this was a very personal read, I'll not go into the particulars, this drives it home David, it has excellent (QUICK) impact. This literally made me sit back and say "WOO"
THANK YOU MUCH
04-18-2006 Deone Wiley    

This is nice! I think you need to change the punctuation some. For instance: put a p eriod after time, put a semi colon after resolve and a period after goals. Then either a period or a semi colon after strong. See if it doesn't read better. Again, this is a very nice poem.
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