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Christ Our Redeemer (A Tetractys
by David Pekrul
copyright 04-18-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Christ Our Redeemer (A Tetractys
Picture Credits: http://www.umacrusade.com/

Christ,
Saviour,
Redeemer,
Eternal King,
Who died a death, so we may live a life.

Then sent His Spirit to dwell with us here,
To give comfort,
And Power,
Wisdom,
Strength.


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04-22-2006 Judy Meeker    

Ah yes! Like a breath of fresh air! A reminder to all, and the scret to immortality! Write on for His glory.
God bless,
Judy Israelyan
04-21-2006 Kimberly Murphy    

I'm in love with this poem. Absolutely gorgous.

Kimberly Murphy
04-19-2006 Toni Sweeney    

I really really like this poem. You did an awesome job on it. You also chose a great picture to go along with the poem. You explained so much about Christ in such a few words. Keep upu the awesome work.
Toni Sweeney
04-19-2006 Deone Wiley    

This is not a rictameter. After I sent it I realized my goof. Nice tetractys, though!
04-19-2006 Deone Wiley    

I normally shy away from a religious poem. I am not a great believer in orthodox religions. But because it was you, I clicked and was very pleased. This rictameter has devotion and sincerity, but is not cloying. Only one comment. In line 7 I think the movement of 'with us' to the end of the line and place 'here' before that would make a different emphasis. And a steadier flow. Other than that, I like this very much.
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