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Summers Song
by Daniel R Patton (Age: 43)
copyright 04-22-2006


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With color's green, yellow, red and brown,
And the sweet smell of flower's,
Planted deep within the ground,
These are the beauties of summer all around,

The birds and the bees,
The winds shaking of the leafs,
Are but a few of the song's,
That summer sound,

With clear sky by day,
And star, moon lit night,
Summers as if a heavenly sight,
And it makes one feel through its stay,
As if it would always be in great abounds,
Yet, seasons do make their little rounds,


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04-23-2006 James Shammas    

Pretty evocation of summer, though I thought the 2nd line in second stanza and the 4th line in the last stanza sounded a little clumsy.

Jim
04-22-2006 Regina Pate    

Awe. What a beautiful picture you paint of summer and of earth in it's best season, Great write, good job, thanks

Gina
04-22-2006 Daniel R Patton    

I am somewhat unsure about this write,it seems as if somethings amiss, hopefully it's just me. I got into a bit of trouble in the last stanza, what do you think? THANKS DANIEL
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