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I just love religious thrillers and this poem, although it has a happy ending. Just thrills me. I love how your images brought the betrayl by Adam and Eve to life, and how it reminds us all to becarefull of anything that seems to good to be true.
YAY! I'm back! *thumbs up sign* GREAT JOB! This is really well-put-together and the flow is extremely smooth, PLUS you used a wide range of vocabulary, which isn't always easy to do, by the way. Excellent job it was one of your best,
Jessi
Yes, your talent blows me away! You always seem to manage to get the right words for rhyme and rythm. It all fits together so perfectly. This is an awesome piece you've written! Do you ever stumble over the words, or do they just flow out of your mind?
BJ
Yeah, you deserve more than 5 points for this, so I came back again to give you more.
If I were a rich woman, you know I would
give you a dozen or even an entire score!
For your poems move us all, you see
and unmathced remains your poetry
We are grateful to bask in your prose
Yeah, you're amazing, and everyone knows!
MAN YOU'RE GOOD AT THIS!!! Sometimes a poem makes me smile. Sometimes it makes me wonder. Sometimes I must read it again. Sometimes even more. ANd sometimes... I just have to bookmark the page or copy and paste it for safe keeping... this is one of those times. When you're published... I want a book... autographed please! :-)
-hands him a platinum rose-
Brilliant work. You have amazing rhyme in this, and a great story too. (Of course, I am rather fond of this theme, so... ^_^) I didn't read the other version, so I cannot really compare them, all I can say is I rather like this one, I have to say the ending was my favorite.
Good write!
Cheers!
We live in paradise and we don't even know it. It is better to die than to live with judgement and blame. Our first sin, was to miss the mark, we were led to the middle of the Garden, two fruits glowing, on two trees growing, one forbidden, the other hidden. Tree of good and evil or the tree of everlasting life. Nothing can take the place of free will. NE WAYS Great write, good job, you got me started, thanks
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