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06-05-2006
Jane Lee
WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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05-07-2006
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
Something that a friend once told me was that, "if a bird has wings, and was meant to fly, then why do you keep it in a cage so it cannot fly?" If you want to know who...or what in this case told me that, read my story Fly. About some of the statements, I agree with hot there's always a bit of light within the darkness, that what you see normally, and what you see with unclouded eyes as you put it, is always very different, and that humans are very weird, and some very stupid. Like a certain government official who's name starts with a B. When the topic turns that way in chat, which is rare, Mehrina always pulls out her favorite Bush joke... I doubt this comment will be approved if I saw it though. :) Also, one line that I have a strong opinion for is the one that you were talking about the "icky" things we learn. Drugs, raping, sex, and all that. Murder and killing are the least of that... I've got more to say about your other thoughts, but if I keep chattering on, I'll most make this page bigger. I like this idea, and hope that you post more. Drop me a line when you submit the next entry. Good work, keep writing!
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
Oh, and something I just noticed: The PnP spell checker has the work "icky" in it, but not "dojo"... Well, that my random thought of hte moment. :)
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04-29-2006
Regina Pate
For some reason my comment got erased, so I'm a little irritated, but here is the jist of it, I love it, especially the part about judging someone, I am priting it out so I can ponder on it some more, and then I will give you better
feedback, k Great write, good job, thanks
Gina
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