Heart Beat Stilled
by
Walter Jones
(Age: 63)
copyright 04-28-2006
Age Rating: 13 to 127
More, it follows a heart in starting found
Feelings as the door finds a place and before,
Glow, has the chance to seek a heart sleeping
In her feeling left to her woe of pain,
Dream if you can in a winding of a stream
Etch you will sun turning faith into, gleam,
Chant my darling love's angels dancing around,
Gallant higher, kiss quickly, as he dies
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