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Over, Under And Really Confused
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 04-29-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I don't get why I'm like this,
Why so many different things enter my mind,
Why I feel so down when the sun shining...
Everyones so happy and I Have a straight face.

I don't get what's wrong with me,
Feeling so down...
I fall... Unconscious
I have to see someone.

I get stressed, upset
To the point of sickness
I'm confused...
I'm not right.

My music comforting me,
My work stressing me,
I want to get away from this island,
Be safe... Where will I be safe?

My love my life,
How much I love you,
Only one person could ever compare to you,
But he's far away...

I'm not a thought in his mind.
Thank you for loving me Jose,
Being my man, my hedgehog, my hero.
Glad we're together.

See I'm not right this poems a mess,
It has no sense,
But I just can't get it in my head,
Why I have to think like this

Why I can't figure out what's wrong.
God don't leave me now,
I need you, you helped me before,
But also robbed me of everything I needed.

My grandparents, how I need them
God I'll always be by your side,
But give me peace of mind,
I take everything so bad...I'm delicate.

My wrists are scared with my pain...
I don't take to changes...
I'm almost better,
I don't make sense...give me my mind.

You gave me Darien.
I'm still the same,
but you gave me strength
I just wanna' be normal...wanna' be OK.


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08-07-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Again I hear your voice from the wilderness inside your mind. Can you describe what goes on in there? Another powerful and emotional write.

Fondly,

Rich


05-01-2006 Judy Meeker    

All things are interesting. Yes this was interesting, very long, but interesting. I tend to believe some do not really read the work, but give cut and paste reviews just to get points.
May God bless,
Mrs. Tigran Israelyan


04-29-2006 Tigran Israelyan    

You're writing interesting.
We must together pass this part of our road,
With Holy burst we are creating every word;
Again us leading angel – muses #999 division:
Let’s blessed every of us, let’s blessed our holy vision.



04-29-2006 Regina Pate    

Thank you for sharing, I hope whatever you are going through you get thru it soon, I know how you feel, writing is how I deal, keep you head up high, and live life with no regrets, Don't let nothing get you down, but don't force yourself to be happy, if you have to cry then cry, don't wipe your tears away, it doesn't make everything ok, see what happens when you let your soul cry, it speaks to God directly, don't stop it, when your ready to move on you will, so I want to say I'm sorry your in pain right now, but you need to be, I don't know why, but you do, just make sure to try not to sleep to much, or suclude yourself to long, Go outside and hear my sparrow's song, Great write, good job, thanks

Gina


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