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Am I Not His Venus Anymore?
by Jackie Edwards (Age: 20)
copyright 05-13-2006


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
As the sun opens the chapter
On a brand new day
I awaken to myself – alone –
He once was here, but now he’s not.

Our love was supposed to last forever,
Candy-coated in endearments and silver linings,
But a new girl came, and took him away,
And now I’m here – heartbroken and cold.

I wrap the blanket of our former love,
Around myself to keep warm,
But it doesn’t work – he’s too long gone,
And my heart has frozen to death.

My choices are not the best,
As I try to vie for him back.
I fight fire with fire, but my flames are doused
By his chilly words

I try to make him see
How much I still need him,
Want him,
Desire him,
But it doesn’t work.

Oh, Cupid, o Eros,
How can you be so cruel?
I was his Venus, his Aphrodite,
His one and only Beauty.

I try to speak, but my lips don’t move
I try to walk, but my legs are stiff
I try to love, but my heart is afraid
I try again, but the feelings are gone.

Eros, Cupid, has cursed me –
Will I ever love again?
Will his arrows remain true,
And fix themselves on the one
Whom my heart desires?

I am Aphrodite, Venus,
To someone else’s heart.
I do not know of his face yet,
But I pray that he will wait for me.



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05-14-2006 Alma H.    

This was so sad. I had the same situation. Even though I wasn't going out with him at first....I have been at my school all my life except for kindergarten. I had tried to get his attention but he was pulled back by a #$&#$^$% girl. Then a new girl came. Uglier than hell. Then he started going out with her. I'm sorry but that was never meant to be. He is kind of dumb but not on school work. I think you got the worst end of the stick and even though I have never felt it, it hurts. Well got to go.
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