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Deeply hanting and uniquely written....beautiful imgary with burning, flowers and bloom...I loved it. So different and meaningful...the flow was good and the poem emotional...awesome work!!!! I'm on my way to read some more works of yors!!!!!
I read the first eight words and started to cry, by the time I was finished with this I needed a tissue box!! I don't know what else to say except... Whaaaaaaa Whaaaaa BOOO HOOOO HOOOOO, so sorry; and Great Write {Sniffle, Sniffle}
Tammy F. Of The Commenting Crusaders
Rich, I loved this poem! ^.^ Really, I did, I agree with every one else: this poem is sad and at the same time eerie, I guess I like that kind. My Grandma and Granddad were cremated and their ashes were scattered in Scarborough (I DO NOT live there!), any way this was a very touching poem, nice write,
Tasha ^^
Rich... I understand the imagery of the cremation of the second time. You write from your heart and soul. No matter how we lose love... sometimes it never dies. Greg Kis
Very good...very eery... I really enjoyed reading this piece, and the dark theme was certainly unexcited. This poem really leaves a print on my, and I can really picture whats accruing in this poem. You've improved greatly when it comes to writing dark poems, and I'm glad I read this one. The only flaw I found in this one, was that you should capitalize the work "passed" in the title. That last line really came out of no where, and it really gave this poem a meaningful and emotional poem. Great work, keep writing.
Wow... I love the imagry in this piece, it gives the feeling of a soft summers day, and yet, it is so sad. I love the emotion in this piece Rich, my favorite has to be, " Her kiss as light as a Monarch; Perching on a white Lilly"
-hands him a golden compass-
Great write!
To close to home for me, like I said I am on my way to a funeral, I was just stalling, but I can feel your emotion in this one, this memory is still fresh in your mind, keep writting and get it out my friend, Great write, good job, thanks
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