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Very nice imagery. I loved the cowboy passionate kiss in the desert also. I really liked how you incorporated your feelings with the coyote howling and the desert winds blowing through. Awesome Story Idea if you ask me. I would like to know more about the cowboy in the desert and his romance and why it would never work out!
Jaime,
welcome to PnP. I can picture the wildness of the desert range and feel the bittersweetness of that cowboy's kiss. Your poem is beautiful in its own way so I would encourage you to keep writing the way that you feel expresses you best.
Nancy