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The Moon
by BJ Niktabe (Age: 50)
copyright 05-15-2006


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  The Moon
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He peers down through the haze

Watching over us through the night,

Hovering above our lives in seeming stillness.

He grasps at the rising tide

And rejoices in the howls of the wolves.

He lights the path of those who hunt in the night

Only to fade away as the sky is once again claimed

By a ball of fire.


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02-21-2008 Richard Reed Jr    

Very vivid and clever portrayal of the moon as a metaphor. I love metaphors and you have certainly done a good job with this one.
Sometimes good things come in small packages as is the case of this poem.
Keep them coming BJ.

Rich
07-28-2006 Robert Joseph Hughes    

This poem paints a beautiful portrait of a soft moonlit night. I loved the gentle approach with a hint of mystery. The rhyme is good and imagery very good. I enjoyed this poem very much.
07-16-2006 Greg Kis    

B... Liked this one too. I always wonder what it would have been like to live in the days of Stonehenge- during the winter solstice-before science explained away all imagination. I believe the moon was worshiped primarily at Stonehenge - during the winter solstice- the sun was secondary - during the summer solstice. Ah, the days when superstition and myth ruled the world!! Greg Kis
05-15-2006 David Pekrul    

A nice write, describing the moon as being gentle, romantic, caring. A soft, comforting description.
Check out my poem "Sun and Moon", which compares the sun and the moon. http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/17956
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