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Letting Go
by Jessica P. (Age: 15)
copyright 06-15-2006


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
I'm letting go
Right now
Right here
And I won't let it show

I'm going to be strong
I'll try not to be weak
I won't let you see tears
You won't get a peek

You don't know what you did
At least that's what you say
Why should I believe you
You lied in the light of day

You don't know how I feel
Yet you hurt me so bad
So don't pretend anymore
Because it's really just sad

I'll get over you
And find time to move on
You'll be stuck in the ditch
I'll forever be gone

I won't dare to look back
I'll just find a new goal
And work toward it
And see the glass as half full


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08-11-2008 Nancy Wilson    

Reading this poem made me feel stronger. I'm going through rough times that sound a lot like this poem "the same story" except I am not ready to move on without my partner. Good poem!
~Nancy~
09-19-2006 Brian Dickenson    

I should imagine that we have all been in this situation. If we are mentally strong we survive and emerge all the stronger for it. Unfortunately, some keep making the same mistakes over again.
I agree with the previous comments, you need to check your work carefully before posting. Also if you have made mistakes edit the piece.
06-21-2006 David Pekrul    

Way to go! This has energy, nice flow, positive and fighting attitude. Great!
You have one spelling error "You won't get a peak (should be 'peek')"
This is still worth 5 points.
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